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April 15, 2012


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Lust cycle? Is that like a rinse cycle, lol. Great six, Donna.
I love your descriptions, especially of his pants and their enjoyment of his backside, lol.

Donna Cummings

TempesteO -- that's exactly what I had in mind for the lust cycle. LOL Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Kate Warren

Have I mentioned that I love your writing? I mean really, I LOVE your writing! Hugging khakis and the unknown lust cycle are brilliant. :)

Tonya Burrows

Nice! I love the line about the khakis enjoying being on his body. Brilliant!

Donna Cummings

Kate, thanks so much! Let me just clear out a space here next to the laptop, so you can whisper those sweet things in my ear when the muse is being cranky. LOL

Donna Cummings

Tonya, I'm glad you like it -- I kinda like visualizing those khakis. LOL

Jenny Hickman

I can see exactly why she is attracted to him... I mean, I've only read six sentences and I'M attracted to him :) Tantalizing six!


Another great six! I'm with all the comments -- love that line about the khakis and the lust-cycle. Have I told you I want to read this book? I must have but I'll say it again...I WANT TO READ THIS BOOK! LOL

Donna Cummings

LOL, Jenny. Thanks so much. I'm a bit partial to Det. Nichols myself. We'll have to fight Shelby for him.

Donna Cummings

Melissa, no worries -- I can hook you up with this book. LOL You've been so wonderful about reviewing my self-pubbed stories, so I'd love to see what you have to say about this one. :)

Angela Quarles

Another awesome 6 Donna! Just love her voice and how she describes things--each bit, from the restraining order, to the khakis to the lust cycle!

Do you need any Beta readers for this? Can't wait to read the whole thing!

Linda Morris

I really like the description of his clothes--unusual and innovative. Great six!

Lorraine Paton

LOL. You have great imagery in these six. He sounds yummy. And I loved the last line. :)

Paula Martin

Like the idea of a lust cycle!

Silver James

Ha! Coffee is a common theme this week. (Like I should be surprised, right?) Donna, your humor shines so brightly in your writing. Love this snippet! It's hard to be funny and still convey a real sense of the characters. You do it, girl!

Wildcats Wife

I absolutely loved your libido line! Fantastic. Your honesty with the descriptions made me smile.

Donna Cummings

Angela, thanks -- and I may take you up on the beta read. I'm getting ready to self-pub this, so I'd love to have your opinion on the entire thing. :)

Donna Cummings

Linda -- thanks. I'm glad to hear you like it.

Lorraine -- I think he's yummy too. I'm happy that you think so too. :)

Paula -- the lust cycle explains SO much. LOL

Donna Cummings

LOL, Silver -- yes, coffee is usually a part of my character's lives. And thanks for the kind words. I really appreciate it!

Donna Cummings

Wildcat's Wife -- I'm glad my snippet made you smile! Thanks for coming by.

Gayle Ramage

lol, fab snippet!

Donna Cummings

Gayle, thanks so much!

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