Thanks to everyone who has been stopping by to read the snippets from my romantic comedy/mystery, I Do. . .or Die. I appreciate your compliments on the heroine, Shelby, and Detective Ryan Nichols, the man who will help her change her non-committal ways--one of these days.
Here's a scene right after someone shoots at Shelby, while she's in Ryan's car, and he's trying to keep her protected:
"I don't think they followed us, but the shot came from back there," Detective Nichols said, half to himself, twisting in the seat while keeping his body lowered over mine.
"I can’t really see."
My face was embarrassingly close to a certain portion of his anatomy. A part that was well worth investigating, but this wasn’t really the time, or the place. Although I was definitely developing an interest.
And it was clear that his interest was well, um, it was developing too.
LOL Nice to see things moving along with these two.
Posted by: Kate Warren | April 22, 2012 at 08:05 AM
Thanks, Kate -- it takes a little longer to move them along in six sentence increments. LOL
Posted by: Donna Cummings | April 22, 2012 at 08:18 AM
I've developed an interest was well. Another great week!
Posted by: Jenny Hickman | April 22, 2012 at 09:29 AM
I'm loving these snippets. Another witty, sexy six!
Posted by: Linda Morris | April 22, 2012 at 09:32 AM
Jenny and Linda, thanks -- I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Posted by: Donna Cummings | April 22, 2012 at 09:36 AM
LOL! Love this, you have such a great voice! Looks like we both have our H/h's in interesting positions :)
Posted by: Angela Quarles | April 22, 2012 at 09:43 AM
I always look forward to your 6SS posts. Shelby never fails to make me smile. I wouldn't mind seeing his... interest. ;)
Posted by: Tonya Burrows | April 22, 2012 at 09:46 AM
Thanks, Angela -- great minds think alike when it comes to compromising positions. LOL
Tonya, I'm glad Shelby makes you smile. And there's a lot about Ryan to make a girl smile too. :)
Posted by: Donna Cummings | April 22, 2012 at 09:50 AM
A very intelligent written six, I enjoyed it. Well done.
Posted by: Alix Cameron | April 22, 2012 at 10:24 AM
There's something special about a good compromising position story. It's even better when the couples in danger and still thinking about sex. Nice job!
Posted by: Jess Schira | April 22, 2012 at 10:43 AM
A very interesting position to be in!
Posted by: Paula Martin | April 22, 2012 at 10:53 AM
lol, no probably not the best time for hanky panky. :p
Posted by: Gayle Ramage | April 22, 2012 at 11:04 AM
Growing attraction...LOLOL! I'm glad my coffee cup was empty. Now I need some. With ice added to cool off! Well done, Donna. ;)
Posted by: Silver James | April 22, 2012 at 11:14 AM
LOL! Another great six, Donna! :)
Posted by: Lorraine Paton | April 22, 2012 at 01:18 PM
Oh, my. LOL I'm looking forward to seeing all these sixes put together!
Posted by: Melissa | April 22, 2012 at 01:53 PM
Alix, thank you!
Jess, it does seem like danger can heighten those kinds of emotions. LOL Thanks for coming by.
Paula, yes, definitely an interesting position!
Gayle, that ole hanky panky is always on their minds. :)
Posted by: Donna Cummings | April 22, 2012 at 03:04 PM
Silver, you know I wouldn't sacrifice coffee. LOL Here's a refill. With ice. :)
Lorraine, thanks so much!
Melissa -- LOL -- I think you'll like all those sixes put together into one story. :)
Posted by: Donna Cummings | April 22, 2012 at 03:06 PM
Great six, Donna! :) I really love your heroine. This was sexy and funny--a great combination. I look forward to reading more. :)
Posted by: Tina Vaughn | April 22, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Tina, I'm so glad you liked Shelby, as well as this snippet. :) I think there will be more to read pretty soon. :)
Posted by: Donna Cummings | April 22, 2012 at 10:40 PM
HA HA that was great!
Posted by: Alisha Robinson | April 24, 2012 at 07:31 PM
Alisa, thanks -- glad you enjoyed it. :)
Posted by: Donna Cummings | April 24, 2012 at 07:50 PM