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May 13, 2012


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Great six. But he sounds almost put out that she didn't swoon after the kiss. LOL

Donna Cummings

LOL, Heather -- I never thought of it that way. He's used to that happening, so maybe he was put out!

Tonya Burrows

Oh, I like him. Can't wait to read this one. It's sitting patiently on my kindle's TBR list!

Donna Cummings

Tonya, I'm glad you've got him on your Kindle. And no worries--he's a patient one. LOL


Great dynamics!

Mac Crowne

Sweet six, Donna. It's my first time here. I'm off to your archives to learn a bit more about Gabriel and Marisa.

Donna Cummings

Thanks, Alix!

Welcome, Mac -- hope you enjoy reading about Gabriel and Marisa. :)

Kate Warren

What could she want? I've got a few ideas. LOL Great six, Donna!

Angela Quarles

Great snippet! Yes, indeed, what would she want, hmmm? Anyone who hasn't read this book yet should download it now!

Donna Cummings

LOL, Kate -- I think you and I (and Marisa) are thinking some of the same things.

Angela, thanks so much for promoting my highwayman. I appreciate it so much. :)

Linda Morris

I know what she wants!

Donna Cummings

LOL, Linda -- is it so obvious? :)

Christine Warner

I like him...he's sexy and confident! Beautifully written six :)

Gemma Parkes

What indeed! Lovely six, beautifully described!

Paula Martin

This is great - love his thoughts about her.

Lorraine Paton

Indeed, what could she want? I know what I'd want if he were my highwayman. LOL. Great six, Donna. I love that he finds her unpredictable.

Wildcats Wife

Love his reaction with her! She sounds bound and determined not to fall prey to his lust. LOVE!! Romantic and charming.

Silver James

I love this, Donna. She is a most unexpected miss and I suspect Gabriel will have his hands "full". *evil grin*

Joya Fields

Very nice, Donna! Sounds like there's some fun action to come in this scene. Along with the hero, I'd like to find out what she wants, too. :)

Kyoko Church

I like him too! He seems bemused, if that's the right word, and I like that idea. One thing, I might change the word "miss" at the end. Or capitalize it. Something, because I think it could be a bit confusing. Perhaps "lass" would be a good substitute?


Great six showing the character of both Gabriel and Marisa! Since I've read and enjoyed their whole story, these snippets brings back great memories. :)

Donna Cummings

Christine, I like your description of him. :)

Gemma, thank you, and thanks for stopping by.

Paula, I'm glad you like his thoughts. :)

Donna Cummings

Lorraine -- LOL -- I think we're on the same page when it comes to this highwayman. And unpredictability is good. :)

Wildcat's Wife -- thanks! I hope it's romantic and charming. :)

Silver -- yes, she does keep him on his toes. LOL

Donna Cummings

Joya, he'll find out soon enough -- although you know how plans can change during the course of a story. :)

Kyoko - "bemused" is exactly the right word. :) I like your suggestions--I'll have to give those some thought.

Melissa, I'm glad this brings back great memories. That's very nice to hear actually!

Tina Vaughn

I love that Gabriel is attracted to Marisa's strength and uses words like "bold" and "spirited" to describe her. Great six, Donna! :)

Donna Cummings

Thanks, Tina. I like that he admires those things too. :)

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