Six Sentence Sunday: Driving Miss Crazy #2

In last week's Six Sentence Sunday snippet from Driving Miss Crazy, Katie is on a stakeout when Slade, a hot guy she doesn't know, jumps into her convertible, and then acts as if they're lovers. In this scene, she agrees to drive Slade to his car--until she finds out it is two states away.

Here is Slade's take on the situation:

She had two bright spots of color on her cheeks, matching the polka dots on her halter dress, and her chest heaved with each angry breath, making it impossible to keep his eyes away from all that luscious rounded flesh.

"Look at me," she demanded.

"I am," he said, his voice a little too dreamy.

She grabbed the front of his shirt and pulled him until their noses were almost touching. He barked out a laugh, but then bit the inside of his lip to keep from smiling at how adorable and sexy she looked. He knew she considered herself fierce, and why should he let her think any differently?

I hope you enjoy this story. I plan to get back to it very soon. Thanks for stopping by each week, Sixies!

 

Comments

[Lisa Fox]

I love his amusement and the brewing tension between them!

[Jessica Subject]

Oh, he's trying to remain serious, but not doing a very good job. I wonder if she'll crack. Great six! :)

[Cara Bristol]

This is so fun and sweet! I love it.

[Melissa]

I love both the main characters already! Can't wait to read this one. :)

[Elise Brookes]

Silly boy. She's going to clean the floor with him. :)

[Christine Warner]

I love a man with humor...and that first paragraph pulled me right in. Nicely done!

[S. J. Maylee]

This six was so much fun. He's so cute as he takes her in and I can just see her trying to take control of the situation. Fabulous 6, I was right there.

[Eleri Stone]

He sounds like trouble. Hot, delicious, complicated trouble.

[Rae Renzi]

Wonderful characterization! Reminds me of a big dog smitten by a little cat.

[Carrie Crain]

Two states away?! Oh, no. This guy is a hoot and her reactions to him, priceless. Love it!

[Gemma Parkes]

Lovely! I love the interaction between these two and the way his mind is working!

[Virginia Kelly]

This is a fabulous story. Love these two, she's gutsy and he's just plain old fashioned great. Love him. :-)

[Sassyspeaks.wordpress.com]

Loving this - his car - two states away - lol

[Lauren Murphy]

I loved it. Too much fun!

[karen Y. bynum]

Loved this! Felt like I was in the car with them! Tense and funny! Excellent 6 :)

[Teresa Cypher]

This is wonderful, Donna! Such great descriptions! The car seat must have room for three, because I was right there with them :-) Great six. :-)

[Kate Warren]

I loved this! These two are so much fun already! Can't wait for more. :)

[Monica Enderle Pierce]

I can't wait 'til he finds out that she's a lot tougher than he thinks!

[Mae Clair]

I can so see this playing out in my head and I'm loving every minute of it. What a fun, sexy read this is going to be, Donna! Love it! :)

[Heather Boyd]

Great six. I love a woman who demands a man looks her in the eye. LOL

[Silver James]

Dang, Donna! I always fall in love with your characters and man but Slade is gonna be a killer. ;) Katie's got her hands full. Can't wait to follow them on their adventures.

[Elin Gregory]

Well he's a saucepot isn't he? :) Terrific stuff.