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October 28, 2012

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Elin Gregory

I was waiting for the glass to break or for him to spit out a fly or for her to swoon away completely. Great job with the various types of tension.

Heather Boyd

*laughing* That was good for me too!

Lisa Fox

Lol! Yes, amazing is the perfect word!

A.S. Fenichel

LOL! This is wonderful!!!

Donna Cummings

Thanks everyone! I was going to say you gave my spirits a little boost, but that didn't sound quite right. LOL And then saying "I'm glad you enjoyed this" didn't fit either. So I'll just say "Thank you!" instead. :)

karen Y. bynum

LOL Love it!! Great hook: "Was it ever." :D

Chip Etier

I'll have some of whatever he was having!

S. J. Maylee

Okay, as I read the 1st paragraph I saw it happening in slow mo. So much fun and I love her line.

Kate Warren

That must be some Chardonnay. I wonder what happens when he drinks Merlot.

Joanne Stewart

hahaha. Love the tease and love her reaction.

Patricia Preston

She is funny. Love her reaction. I hope you are okay and stay safe during the storm. Tweet and let us know how it goes.

Sassyspeaks.wordpress.com

eating and drinking can be so sexy (food and beverages I mean!)

Cara Bristol

Totally fun. Love your writing.

Virginia Kelly

LOL! Love this, from her having to hold on to keep from melting to her final line. Fantastic!

Carrie Crain

Reading her watch him drink his wine was more amazing to her and ME both!!

Silver James

Yeah....Now she needs to turn the tables on him by either eating an ice cream cone, sucking an orange, or going for broke and tying a cherry stem with her teeth and tongue. ;9

Lorraine Paton

Haha! Brilliant six. Loved it. :)

S E Gilchrist

I loved this excerpt. Hope its her turn next to set him 'alight'.

Veronica Scott

Amazing to read as well LOL! Really a terrific excerpt!

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